
The branches move and sway.
A squirrel comes out to play.
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The sun begins to rise without a sound.
The light plays out onto the ground.
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The birds rise and begin to sing.
Foxes come out and see the beautiful spring.
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The breeze brings the mice out of their home.
They chatter and run and together they roam.
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A river gurgles, jumps and plays,
feeling joy in being part of the days.
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As the sun reaches its full height in the air,
The forest wakes up with joy and care.

Well, here you go guys. I actually wrote a poem! This one wasn’t written three years ago! Haha! At long last I have written a poem!!
So, now I want an honest answer. What did you think? Did you like it? Not like it? Hate it? Absolutely despise every single word? Lol I hope not! Please chat in the comments! I would love to know what you think! 😃

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Love the poem! You did a great job. 😀
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Thank you!! 🙂
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Oh, wow! I’m impressed, Caleb! You are sooooo talented! I wish I could write a poem…. I’ve tried, but it doesn’t work for me!
I LOVED this poem!
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AAH I DON’T KNOW WHAT TO SAY!! Thank you!
I’m really glad that you liked it!!! 😀
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First of all, I absolutely love the header image! It really sets the tone for your poem! Second of all, the poem felt very bouncy and springy. It reminds me that there’s a light at the end of this wintery tunnel. 🙂 It did take me a moment to kind of find the rhythm in the poem, but I love the imagery and the language you’ve used! Thanks so much for sharing this with us!!
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Eeeeek thank you so much Coralie! I’m really glad you liked it! 😀
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Sweet!! I loved this!!
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Thank you! 😀
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Of course! I mean it!
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