Poem: Groggy Forest

The branches move and sway.

A squirrel comes out to play.

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The sun begins to rise without a sound.

The light plays out onto the ground.

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The birds rise and begin to sing.

Foxes come out and see the beautiful spring.

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The breeze brings the mice out of their home.

They chatter and run and together they roam.

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A river gurgles, jumps and plays,

feeling joy in being part of the days.

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As the sun reaches its full height in the air,

The forest wakes up with joy and care.

Well, here you go guys. I actually wrote a poem! This one wasn’t written three years ago! Haha! At long last I have written a poem!!

So, now I want an honest answer. What did you think? Did you like it? Not like it? Hate it? Absolutely despise every single word? Lol I hope not! Please chat in the comments! I would love to know what you think! 😃

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10 thoughts on “Poem: Groggy Forest

  1. First of all, I absolutely love the header image! It really sets the tone for your poem! Second of all, the poem felt very bouncy and springy. It reminds me that there’s a light at the end of this wintery tunnel. 🙂 It did take me a moment to kind of find the rhythm in the poem, but I love the imagery and the language you’ve used! Thanks so much for sharing this with us!!

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